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Three self-interrogations recently came to my mind :
1. Are my comics too complicated ? I mean, I always put a lot of dialogue bubbles in them. This is how I work ; I love to say a lot about my stories, I'm naturally talkative. But I'm not sure if it's a good idea. Should I reduce the amount of dialogues to make it more readable ?
2. Is everyting alright with the order of my bubbles ? I heard some people saying it was "cancer", "aweful" and "horrible". Should I consider this an inviation to make it simpler ?
3. Last but not least, is their somebody out there who could help me "proofread" my comics ? I know my english level is very good, but nobody's safe from a few grammar mistakes ! I especially fear sentence consistency and idioms ; I tend to translate from french to english a bit too literally^^.
Thanks for your help !
1. Are my comics too complicated ? I mean, I always put a lot of dialogue bubbles in them. This is how I work ; I love to say a lot about my stories, I'm naturally talkative. But I'm not sure if it's a good idea. Should I reduce the amount of dialogues to make it more readable ?
2. Is everyting alright with the order of my bubbles ? I heard some people saying it was "cancer", "aweful" and "horrible". Should I consider this an inviation to make it simpler ?
3. Last but not least, is their somebody out there who could help me "proofread" my comics ? I know my english level is very good, but nobody's safe from a few grammar mistakes ! I especially fear sentence consistency and idioms ; I tend to translate from french to english a bit too literally^^.
Thanks for your help !
Deleting Old pictures
Hello fellow deviants,
Just to let you know that very shortly (within a week), I'll be deleting a couple of old pictures that, I think, no longer fit into my gallery. Even though I am currently on hiatus until hell freezes over, I still believe in good presentation, and the style I use to have is not something I wish to see exposed to the eyes of the world art community.
As I've recently had issues with people who felt surprised to notice that some of my artworks had mysteriously "disappeared" from my page, I'm warning you now. If you want to save one of my artworks to your personal computer or electronic device, please do it now ; you have
Japanese Translator Needed !
Hi folks!
The title says it all. I posted my Zootoopia Comic on Pixiv a week ago and I need someone to help me translate it into Japanese.
Is anyone interested ?
Have a good day!
Zootopia FanFictions, anyone ?
Hi folks !
I've been thinking about something recently : why not writing a zootopia fanfiction, for lack of having the required equipment to draw at the moment ? Like, I don't know, a long story with no real ending, in a TV series-like format with each chapter working as a specific episode of the series. I've always dreamed of doing that; would be my own tribute to what I shamelessly call my all-time favorite animated movie.
What do you think about that ? Would you be interested in participating, like provinding ideas, stories, proofreading ?
As you may know, I'm not very active at the present time (blame it on...well, me^^). I'm still wai
Updates: Need a new computer...
As the title says, my current computer is dying.
On July 31th, I was betrayed by a thunderstorm (I still love them anyway) and water leaked through my roof. My computer was hit.
A few days after the incident (and a couple of blue screens), it miraculously came back to life. But it was only a short respite, as it is now slowly passing away again. And for good. It is so damaged that I cannot even use my graphic software, unless I want to spend about 5 good minutes just OPENNING a new document. Basically, it has become impossible to create a new artwork. And for those of you who's been watching me for my newest creation, the Zootopia comic "Th
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Ok dont be offended about the bubbles you have your own style but it can be a little ezer to read just put them in order by that i mean top to bottom then it will be ezer to understand for everyone,
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